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never had I moments
of waking in a strange bed
next to lithe flesh
unknown to me
yet I presumably I had known it
the night before

my wakings
in beds always
I remember
alone in soul
even when with
loved one
at my side

morning is horror
I disavow thought
'til noon
avoiding the comprehension
of another day starting
my continued role on
its stage
cringing at rehearsed lines
I must enunciate to project
to the back row critics
of my performance

always do I wonder
could I ever once pry
open my own
hungover lids
to comprehend a new ceiling
thread count unfamiliar
the scent of a stupored knowing
caressing my senses
would I then dread
every morning thereafter
Not feeling well, obviously...
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:icongreywin:
Greywin Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
very beautiful work
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TGfascinated Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you. Most of my poetry is usually posted here: enigmaticsmile.deviantart.com if you're interested.
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:icongreywin:
Greywin Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
thank you very much
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FallenfromtheStarz Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
agreed^^^^^^^^^^
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FallenfromtheStarz Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
i meant to point down
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:icontgfascinated:
TGfascinated Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
What does it mean if you point down? And do you agree with the poem or what TraceStudios said?
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:iconfallenfromthestarz:
FallenfromtheStarz Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
yes.Ilike poem I do.I just think its a little slathered together thats all.What for did you write this in?
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TGfascinated Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Microsoft Wordpad.
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:iconfallenfromthestarz:
FallenfromtheStarz Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
i meant to say what form did you write this in?
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:icontgfascinated:
TGfascinated Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Free verse...
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